Her death was due to mysterious circumstances and I was assigned to the case. I, Alejandra Montez, am going to investigate the case of Gloria Garcia. She lived in a small town in Colorado. She was 18 years old when she had been murdered while she was going to the store at night. This happened on June 14, 2006. It was passed 9 o’ clock at night when she asked her mother for permission to go to the store at night. Her mother wondered why she would want to go to the store at night so gave her permission to go to the store. Her mother watched her from the window to see if she was going to the store. When she turned the corner, her mother was worried but good thing she didn't forget her cell phone. Her mother said that Gloria told her that she was going to take too long because she needed to buy a lot of things. When I heard the story from when she last saw her, I told her that I was going to get to the bottom of this. I wasn’t going to let her down. I think I had a clue on who had murdered her or had something to do with it.
The next day we went to the store where Gloria said that she was going to go to buy the things she needed. The owner from the store knew who she was. We asked the owner if he had seen Gloria in the store last night. He said that he did see her, she just bought something’s from the store and left home. So from there I was really suspicious that somebody had taken her while she was on her way home. I looked at the man’s expression when he told us if he seen Gloria and something told me that he had something to with it because he looked nervous. I asked him more questions which were: what did she buy?, what way did she go?, was there anyone waiting for her outside?, was she the only one walking on the street?, and did you see her cross the street because he can see what way Gloria went to? He was getting nervous but I didn’t care because I’m going to find out who took her.
So the next morning, I receive a call from Gloria’s mother. She tells me that she found Gloria’s necklace on the floor right next to the store that Gloria had gone to. I rushed over to where she was because I wanted to see if there were any fingerprints on he necklace. I got there as fast as I can and I took the necklace from her and I checked it. There were no finger prints on it. So then I had an idea which was to check the woods because the woods were right next to the house, it was a road and some stores but the rest are the woods. My partner, Sam, the policemen that are helping out, Gloria’s mother, and me, go out looking for Gloria in the woods. We notice that their was clothes all over the grass land. Gloria’s mother picks one of the clothes and notices that it’s Gloria’s clothes. So I get the clue that Gloria has to be here somewhere. I keep walking to see if there are more clues and I see a body in the pond. I run over to the pond and notice that it’s a girl's body. I ask Gloria’s mother if its Gloria and she checks it and says YES!.
I look at Gloria’s mother and there are tears rolling on her cheeks. I told her that I would find out who killed and I will put him in jail for many many years. So I turned around to get out and I notice that there is an envelope on the floor. I open it and it has a pair of directions. I look at who wrote it and for who it was. It was from Patrick Scott and it was for Gloria. The letter that the suspect wrote says:
“Dear Gloria,
1) Go to the store that is right next to your house if your parents ask you why you are going to the store tell them that you are going to buy something’s you need, 2) Act like your going to the store but when you turn the corner go straight down to the park nearby don’t let no one who knows you see you, 3) Wait for a white Cadillac to arrived and get on it.
IF YOU DON’T DO THIS THEN I’M GOING TO KILL YOUR MOTHER SO YOU BETTER MEET ME THERE OR ELSE YOU KNOW WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN TO YOUR MOMMY!!!!!!!!! (I'M GOING TO KILL HER)
Much love from, Patrick Scott”
It wasn't written in ink, it was typed in the computer. AHA!!!!!!!!!!! I found the clues that I was looking for. The clues here where: Patrick Scott and white Cadillac. Now I’m going to head down the police station and look in the computer and look up Patrick Scott. I looked him up and it gave me all his information. PLUS: he has committed more crimes to other teenagers. I write down all his information and went to his house where he lives. All my partners come with me and we went to go look for him. We enter his house without knocking.There was a person sitting in the living room watching T.V. We asked him if he was Patrick Scott and he said yes! He was like whose there and what are you doing in my house? Gloria’s mother started to tell him things like why did you kill my daughter and all those things like that. We arrested him and took him to jail. Now he is going to serve 50 years of jail for committing murder. Gloria’s mother held a funeral for Gloria’s death and she cried a lot. We all honored her for everything she did, she was close to graduating high school and was going to College next year. She was the best student in her whole class and the second place winner for the volleyball games.
In my opinion, I thought that it was good that we found her body because we held a funeral for Gloria with her own body. Now her mother can go visit her often and not be lonely. I thought that the man that murdered her was a total jerk because he shouldn’t have murder her in the first place. But I think that its good that he’s in jail for committing murder. I'm proud that I found the killer responsible for Gloria's death.
The next day we went to the store where Gloria said that she was going to go to buy the things she needed. The owner from the store knew who she was. We asked the owner if he had seen Gloria in the store last night. He said that he did see her, she just bought something’s from the store and left home. So from there I was really suspicious that somebody had taken her while she was on her way home. I looked at the man’s expression when he told us if he seen Gloria and something told me that he had something to with it because he looked nervous. I asked him more questions which were: what did she buy?, what way did she go?, was there anyone waiting for her outside?, was she the only one walking on the street?, and did you see her cross the street because he can see what way Gloria went to? He was getting nervous but I didn’t care because I’m going to find out who took her.
So the next morning, I receive a call from Gloria’s mother. She tells me that she found Gloria’s necklace on the floor right next to the store that Gloria had gone to. I rushed over to where she was because I wanted to see if there were any fingerprints on he necklace. I got there as fast as I can and I took the necklace from her and I checked it. There were no finger prints on it. So then I had an idea which was to check the woods because the woods were right next to the house, it was a road and some stores but the rest are the woods. My partner, Sam, the policemen that are helping out, Gloria’s mother, and me, go out looking for Gloria in the woods. We notice that their was clothes all over the grass land. Gloria’s mother picks one of the clothes and notices that it’s Gloria’s clothes. So I get the clue that Gloria has to be here somewhere. I keep walking to see if there are more clues and I see a body in the pond. I run over to the pond and notice that it’s a girl's body. I ask Gloria’s mother if its Gloria and she checks it and says YES!.
I look at Gloria’s mother and there are tears rolling on her cheeks. I told her that I would find out who killed and I will put him in jail for many many years. So I turned around to get out and I notice that there is an envelope on the floor. I open it and it has a pair of directions. I look at who wrote it and for who it was. It was from Patrick Scott and it was for Gloria. The letter that the suspect wrote says:
“Dear Gloria,
1) Go to the store that is right next to your house if your parents ask you why you are going to the store tell them that you are going to buy something’s you need, 2) Act like your going to the store but when you turn the corner go straight down to the park nearby don’t let no one who knows you see you, 3) Wait for a white Cadillac to arrived and get on it.
IF YOU DON’T DO THIS THEN I’M GOING TO KILL YOUR MOTHER SO YOU BETTER MEET ME THERE OR ELSE YOU KNOW WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN TO YOUR MOMMY!!!!!!!!! (I'M GOING TO KILL HER)
Much love from, Patrick Scott”
It wasn't written in ink, it was typed in the computer. AHA!!!!!!!!!!! I found the clues that I was looking for. The clues here where: Patrick Scott and white Cadillac. Now I’m going to head down the police station and look in the computer and look up Patrick Scott. I looked him up and it gave me all his information. PLUS: he has committed more crimes to other teenagers. I write down all his information and went to his house where he lives. All my partners come with me and we went to go look for him. We enter his house without knocking.There was a person sitting in the living room watching T.V. We asked him if he was Patrick Scott and he said yes! He was like whose there and what are you doing in my house? Gloria’s mother started to tell him things like why did you kill my daughter and all those things like that. We arrested him and took him to jail. Now he is going to serve 50 years of jail for committing murder. Gloria’s mother held a funeral for Gloria’s death and she cried a lot. We all honored her for everything she did, she was close to graduating high school and was going to College next year. She was the best student in her whole class and the second place winner for the volleyball games.
In my opinion, I thought that it was good that we found her body because we held a funeral for Gloria with her own body. Now her mother can go visit her often and not be lonely. I thought that the man that murdered her was a total jerk because he shouldn’t have murder her in the first place. But I think that its good that he’s in jail for committing murder. I'm proud that I found the killer responsible for Gloria's death.
good story alexy
ReplyDelete